Playing with Hemmingway

As many of you have likely heard, there's a new app out there to help with your writing. It purports to make writing more understandable. It seems to work. Different colour highlights tell you what's wrong and give you suggestions on how to fix it. Take, for example, this terribly obtuse and unreadable piece.



Adverb laden, five difficult sentences and irritatingly passive, this prose requires a rewrite.



There. Much better. Thank you, Hemingway.